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Drawing Drawing \ Figure | 10/18/05 @143 | bitoy | Comments critiques (14) | Views views (1775)


geisha
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adobe illustrator cs.......hope u like it
 
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Avatar Arconian

 10/18/05 @178

I think you got the feeling, bitoy...just a few words...some more transition/blending for the facial edges, wording or at least the first letter in a different color, and focus on the eyes...they'll tell a thousand stories...good job, I like it!!!
 
Avatar VinA

 10/18/05 @217

nice work! i like it! :)
 
Avatar starqueen

 10/18/05 @273

i love the flow in this....but i dont think the image quite fits a geisha, at all. she looks more like a female warrior. ..... the japanese are masters at subtlety, and i think this is missing it - esp where a geisha is concerned.

technically, the face isnt white enough, the same flower is being duplicated on the robes (which a geisha would never allow), and she has chopsticks in her hair instead of hair ornaments.

i think im critiquing so much about the points of what a geisha would look and express herself because, you put "geisha" in black over white - which indicates a very large emphasis and respect of the word geisha. its lacking that evidence here.

+6
 
Avatar Annarki

 10/18/05 @414

ikaw ni toy?
 
Avatar SudnDeath

 10/18/05 @909

nice work agree with Arconians great comments +7 :)
 
Avatar ares

 10/19/05 @063

shes cute..
 
Avatar kittyKat

 10/19/05 @629

I like how you mixed in the hair with the font
 
Avatar Annarki

 10/20/05 @041

i think her name's Geisha.
 
Avatar JESR

 10/22/05 @218

very nice colors and concept- +10/10
 
Avatar Stormchild

 10/24/05 @060

Nice illustration. I agree that the face needs to be whiter, and that you need to soften some of the edges (such as her eye-shadowing). She does look a little fierce for a geisha; real geisha are experts at appearing extremely delicate. I think the eyes, and especially the eyebrows, need to portray a much gentler expression. Good job on the kimono; it could use a little more shading (it seems flat, but should be slightly billowy), but the floral print is very nice.

I'll echo kittyKat's comment about the hair blending with the font -- it works well. However, I think the capital "G" is too far away from the other characters, and needs to be manually kerned much tighter. I also would have liked to see the kanji for the word "geisha".

All in all, pretty well done. Let's see some more!

By the way, Annarki: geisha is an occupation, not a person's name. It basically means "entertainer". The first character, "gei", means "art, craft, performance, acting, etc.", and the second -- "sha" -- means "person". Geisha were young girls, trained to sing, dance, and generally entertain people (mostly men) in tea houses and such.
 
Avatar Annarki

 10/25/05 @071

LOOOL as what starqueen said, the image does not quite fit a geisha, at all. so, i conclude since the image is not at all geisha maybe it would better fit as her name not the image itself. ;p

kay nganu, dili diay pwede himuon ug ngan ng Geisha?
 
Avatar astrid

 10/26/05 @164

i like the gumamelas....hehe...is this a hawaiian geisha?
 
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